Promised Pictures and What's to come

First a little about the story. I've been reading your comments (which are much appreciated by the way) and been skimming past chapters, and have come to the realization that it's a little too perfect now. And I don't know about you, but I need a little spice every now and again, and I think this story is due for some spice. For the past week I have been tossing around ideas in my head when I have a free moment, so hopefully after Wednesday (anytime before is crazy and psychotic) I will start writing a new chapter and have it posted by Saturday, but no promises.

Again I love your comments, they are a real confidence booster, but don't hesitate to speak your mind and tell me what you really think or ideas of where it might be cool to see the story go. I'm tough I can take a little criticism. I've had to read some pretty depressing books for AP lately, and I think that it can kinda be seen here. Everything is just, I dunno 'too perfect' I guess, I'm kinda losing interest in my own story. I'm not saying my story sucks or anything, it's just getting like I said 'too perfect'. If you like it that way, I'll incorporate it more often. But seriously, feel free to speak your mind, I would like to improve this story, but I need your help to do so.

Okay, enough ranting about the story and on to the next thing. I don't know if you read the "Sorry not a story update" from October, but I did get 2 puppies, Echo and Fleury. And I did promise to post pictures of them so enjoy! My two dogs that passed away are on the side. Oh, and GO PENS!!!!

Echo is in the first two pictures, the first she has fallen asleep in my lap while I was watching a hockey game, the second, she just fell asleep upside down.

Echo is on the left (the brown one) and Fleury is on the right. They are sisters from the same litter, even though they don't look very much a like. This picture was taken when we first got them, so now they are a lot bigger. I would probably guess that Echo is about 40-45 pounds, and Fleury is 30-35, and they're not even 5 months old yet!

This is Fleury looking outside.

November 17, 2008 at Monday, November 17, 2008

9 Comments to "Promised Pictures and What's to come"

The picture of the dog, Echo, sleeping upside down is too cute lol :)

Awwwww they are so cute! :)

Can't wait to see what kind of 'spice' you come up with!

Posted by Anonymous ( November 17, 2008 at 9:02 PM )

Awwww...they're super adorab;e!

Cute puppies! FYI, put baby oil on a bandage and it comes off much easier and with very little "ouch".
I am enjoying your blog, and the only critism that I have is your spelling (following, not fallowing), it is just jarring to me to hit mis-spelled words. I think you have a real talent for writing and I hope you keep it up.

I absolutly love ur story and kinda agree about spicing it up but please nothing drastic!!!! :-) but i do have to say after being interupted they havent slept together since that one time years ago....unless i completly missed it so maybe that can cause some tension??? anyways keep up the awesome work I always get excited when I see u updated :-)

Ha! Yeah, I know about the spelling and I notice my grammar mistakes too. Sometimes I don't check over the chapters before I post, or sometimes I do and just miss it. I'm kinda a grammar snob, as my mom likes to call me, so my spelling and stuff bugs me too. Sorry about that, I know how you feel. ;D

Love your dog pics, especially Echo sleeping upside down. Do you suppose some of us look like that when we sleep? :) I love your story and I like that the drama is at a minimum, but there is nothing wrong with a little 'spice' either. Whatever you do will be great!

Aww, your puppies are adorable! Hopefully they are behaving well for ya! =]

There is nothing wrong with 'too perfect' it's kinda nice when everything for a little while is smooth sailing. Not that there isn't anything wrong with a little drama here and there. Your story is great so far, keep up the good work!

they r so cute

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